I’ve been in a rhythm lately and have been working not just on word count but on expanding the depth and breadth of my characters.  Gotta make sure you care about them, you know?  Anyway, in that vein I’ve added about 400 since last update and came up with this ‘teaser’ I guess you would call it for my novel.
I’d love to know what you all think about it.  Is it good, bad, silly, smart, stupid, intriguing?

…what say you.

The first one died to piqué her interest
The second to touch her soul
The third one died to steal her peace
The fourth makes Fear, his goal
So, what did you think?  Wanna read it?